by eric Aug 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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A broken hearted girl |
by Courtney
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For one, I love the title you chose- it was a real hook. It's amazing how you can tell such good stories and yet seem to not put the rhyme and flow in jepardy! Looking forward to reading more! |
by Kayd
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I love your work, it similar to what I write ;) |
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Such a tradgedy. :( |
by eric
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I dont understand how my poem isnt deep enough..but i think your comment isnt deep enough. please let me know how i can fix it :)! thanks |
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Good try but i think your poem isn;t deep enough. however it contents many truths |