LOL I luved it! Great work!

Lol cuteee

Haha thats funny
its amazing i found it realy nice and if you made it up you have an amazing talent
xoxroxy

What a cut poem!! Im going to read it to my niece: )

Lmao this is good i like it alot:D i would have burst out laughing if i wasnt in a library :D good job :D

keenan

Haha=) Great job!=) Loll.. Its very cute! 5/5

Men, talk about to tallent in comedy. keep it up.

Lol nice poem make up. Very funny. Try some poems that don't rhyme

lol again

Catherine Stephens

Very adorable! No more candy because of mandy!!

So... Funny, great rhythem, great plot/theme, great characters... Just great poem!!

I love it!

Haha... Its so cute. =].
I like it very much Cassie.
[Still cant believe it was you on there]
Well done
=]
Take care, Elle
xx

Haha. I like this one. It's rather cute.

Lol.. very cute... great job.. made me laugh..great rhythm..and loved the characters.. 5/5
Best Wishes..
Could You Please rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xXx