I love this type of poem too. The plot was good && it even rhymed. Good job and keep it up.

Dang! Simple yet... Amazing :) 5/5 As always you deserve no less! (I'm adding you to my favs if you're not already there!!!)

Wow.. That was great! I loved how you added in a rhyme even though you didn't have to.. It just made it flow so much better.. Again you used good words and descriptions.. Nice job! 5/5

Beautiful poem!!! The simplicity of your words are so intense. What a lovely poem with great meaning. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Beautifully written and such a great way to express yourself. I'm not too sure on dark poems but yours was class. You have talent and it shines through your work :)

Wow! This is so simple but yet so amazing it paints such a vivid picture for me.You are such a gifted writer.

Wow,
another 5/5 from me...

I've read this a while ago, but forgot to comment and vote XD I liked it sooooo much! Althought it's short it's really sweet! The rhyme makes it awesome! I don't know why I like it so much... but I do XD
So wonderful work! Maybe I'll try that form XD
10/5 !!