When I Cry (Lanturne)

by Italian Stallion   Aug 27, 2006


........When
.........I Cry
.....In the dark
....I think of you
.........gone

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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Lanturne poems have a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,1

must resemble the shape of a japanese lanturn.
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***Written for a contest***

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  • 19 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, how cool. im gonna try the japanese lantern.
    anyway great work. great talent.
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I have always loved the different styles of poetry. You make the lanturn appear so easy; yet. it is one style that I have great difficulty attempting.

    Wonderfully done.

    --Sher

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