To: Death

by Rae   Aug 27, 2006


Touch me Death,
for I am lost,
There is no hope,
in this chaos.

No yearning or feeling,
Passion or Pride,
There is nothing here,
for I have died.

Touch me Death,
for I am lost,
Is there no hope,
in this chaos?

No Hurt or Happiness,
Anger or Sorrow,
There is nothing here,
not even tomorrow.

Don't touch me Death,
Though I am lost,
I will find my hope,
in this chaos.

I will find my happiness,
my passion, my pride,
I will find myself,
I will NOT die.

***I wrote this during post-pardum depression after my dad tried to kill himself.***

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was an amazing poem. you have such a talent to put it simply yet imply such emotion. I felt so caught up in it. Great job....:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Thanks for your comments...and I REALLY liked this poem. It really flowed but it was still simple and I liked it. I'm sorry you had to go through that, but you expressed this very well. I'd love to see more of your work soon! ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Rae

    Thanks everyone for the good reinforcments. It makes me feel much better knowing that this, my most heart-felt poem is appreciated and understood... Rae

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very great poem and welcome to the site, you are great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Its amazing poets very expressive . i really love the last line... but i truely like this poem i was enjoyed reading this keep on writing i know u have a talent to show, thanks for sharing ur great poem i like it 5/5

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