Comments : Message In A Bottle

  • 17 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Beautiful, I loved it..

    xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Excellent poem loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    An awesome message written in a homespun bottle for all to enjoy. my favorite of yours so far.

    your servant:
    david

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was good I loved it. excellent word choice, and strong emtions. Thanks for the comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A good poem I enjoyed it very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like anything about this poem. It has too many mistakes. Flow is bad and atmosphere is poor. You could describe emotions a lot better. Wording isn't good and you have many repetition.