The gift of death
by josh-and-valerie-together-forever-and-always Aug 28, 2006
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I'm getting tired of hearing you scream as i glare at you my eyes beam soon you do not know but you will be dead and you will regret every word you said as i stab you i twist the knife i will feel the death i have long missed deep down you know you deserved it and i am the one who has reserved it i hand you this gift with pleasure and this memory i will always treasure |
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17 years ago
by Kersten
Great 5/5 thanks for your comment on Can she escape her fate
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17 years ago
by X~Angie~X
Great poem. i love it. im sorry it took me a while to get bak to u.. thanx for the comment on my poem it means alot. htis is an amazing poem. i love it. keep on writing
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17 years ago
by Kiss My Sass
I like the way anger was expressed in your poem. and the way you expressed the twisting of the knife, and the stabbing again and again.. it was awesome
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17 years ago
by deadman
Good job keep it up
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17 years ago
by Nobodys Hero
This poem was relli good, It was very dark and well written! 5/5
