Your Criptonite..

by Sophie   Aug 29, 2006


Your criptonite entrances me
Smothering my body
It traps me, it makes me numb
My heart drowning intensly.
My body tranquilized
Laying lifelessly
You found my weakness
I am forever surrendered.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, hunny! That was great! The flow was a little off but the descripitons were awesome! Very interesting poem.. Nicely done 5/5