Unbreakable

by victoria   Sep 1, 2006


Love is unbreakable
Its two people beneath the sun,
Love is unbreakable,
Its two hearts that live for one another,
Love is unbreakable
If your heart can feel it,its true,
Love i have to say is unbreakable,
because life without you would be unbarable and i ahve to say that is true.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle161817

    Good good good job yes you still haven't fixed the ahve but still we know what you mean. goog job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Oh and the mistake of "have" was on the last line :) soory forgot to say that

    Take Care
    -*-Tormented
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Nice poem...it flowed very well! and there was SOME rhyme in there but i think you should make it more longer and you wrote "ahve" instead of "have" i think but other then that it was very good! :)
    Keep writing
    And
    Keep Smiling
    4/5

    Much Love
    -*- Tormented

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