Endless Torture

by The Black Stallion   Sep 1, 2006


Endless Torture
By:Drayce Marks

The two girls i like most in the world

Are confusing than a mindless twirl

Somedays they are nice other days they mean

Maybe they aren't who they seem

One is as beautiful as the sun light

The other as dark as the moon blight

So I must say I'm in a mighty plight

Which is much to their delight

The only problem is they don't want me

So I'll forever live in an endless torture

How mad I am makes me wanna scorcher

As long as I live,breathe,and strive this will always burn

I have no one nowhere to turn

This is a sickening feeling it makes my stomach churn

Because I can't make their feelings turn

My existence needs to be spurned

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  • 13 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    YeA I kInDa AgReE wItH xDarkSuicidex ThE fLoW Is KiNd Of BrOkN..((word of advise, not all poems need to ryme.))

    keep writing practice makes perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Aw. That was very good. I liked the emotion and depth. Nice work.

    -Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .:*LeT mE lEt Go*:.

    This was a pretty good poem although some of the rhyming through me off but all together good job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Confused at heart

    Very good i liked it....

    Melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You have interesting word choice, but the flow was so broken....i'm not sure what to say..

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

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