by The Black Stallion Sep 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Endless Torture |
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YeA I kInDa AgReE wItH xDarkSuicidex ThE fLoW Is KiNd Of BrOkN..((word of advise, not all poems need to ryme.)) |
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Aw. That was very good. I liked the emotion and depth. Nice work. |
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This was a pretty good poem although some of the rhyming through me off but all together good job!! |
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Very good i liked it.... |
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You have interesting word choice, but the flow was so broken....i'm not sure what to say.. |