Suicidal Rhyme

by Levi   Sep 2, 2006


The blood flows from the open wound,
The final breath can never come to soon.
Dripping slowly towards the puddle on the floor,
I just couldn't take life anymore.
Losing grip on my blood stained knife,
Escaping this hell, that was my life.

Didn't really wanna go out this way,
but I couldn't face the World for another day.
Sorry but it's the only way I saw out,
I wanted help but no-one ever heard me shout.
My body begins to go numb and cold,
To Death my souls been easily sold.

My last uttered words are few,
"God, please take my soul I give it unto you."
It all goes dark and I begin to see the Light,
Death has taken me without a fight.
I wonder if it's the eternal demon's scream,
or the everlasting land of all my dreams...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg that was amazing...5/5....u've got so much talent it's really hard to rhyme (well i think it is) but you did a great job!keep it up
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by Lil M

    How sad! This poem sounds really good and it makes you think about your life more like what if i died tommorow? would anyone miss me? that kind of thing you know?