Hey!
This poem is very good! I only saw one mistake which was:
the soft kisses in your neck
The soft kisses ON your neck
The flow seemed a TINY lil bit rocky
but i don't why its voted 3...mostly if they low-vote someone its maybe because of jealousy or they might have a different opnion about it :)
But i gave it 4/5!
Well done!
And
Keep writing

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake

I liked it i believe that

what Pathetic said..

i enjoyed it a lot tho =3

im gunna avoid voteing till i decide what it is 4-5 lol

Mimz, je bent echt geweldig!!!!! (ik krijg gewoon rillingen van teksten van jou hey...)

Knufkus!

I actually found that poem to be really...well beautiful. i feel that way about a guy from the past and i just want you to know i give a 5/5

Wow, mimzy this is pretty good. I don't know why people gave you 4/5 for this. I thought this was excellent.

Hey,
een geweldig gedicht goed gedaan,
kuzzies stephanie

Nice, i really liked your poem. keep up the good work. ^_^