Hidden Feelings

by letmebeyours   Sep 5, 2006


Today in and out i breathed without you there
I thought of you and pretended i didn't still care

Ive learn to hide the sensation i feel when i hear your name
Trying to hide that after all of this time i still love you....just the same

I'm not jealous of her, just what she has
Acknowledging the fact that i might be left a mere memory of the past

I'm gonna let u see me doing just fine
You're gonna see me not wanting you to be mine

ill pass you in the hallway and not even look u in the eye
All the while only ill know that I'm dying inside

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  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    This really touched home with me love. My heart felt your every word. I loved this and its goin in my favs, which truley says sumthing because i only have like 5 or so. But i loved it. I kno how it is to fake and pretend to be strong when really on the inside.....ur heart will never stop crying...
    <3
    L.C

  • 16 years ago

    by coupon can

    "ill pass you in the hallway and not even look u in the eye
    All the while only ill know that I'm dying inside"

    amazing lines. :( unfortunally i can relate. but its gettin better with time. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Really good poetry! i love the way you worded this and how each line rhymed without complications. that takes talent. keep up the good work. please comment and rate my poems! thanks! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Hey, I always try to comment other people who comment me. I can relate to this so much. I know the feeling you get when you pass someone in the hall and you try not to look at them in the eye. Especially if you like someone very much. It's a great poem and has a positive feeling to it, except for the ending. This is how so many peopel feel sometimes. We move on, and it's easier said than done. Great poem and I will continue commenting on any poems you write.

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