How sad... very cicid image i got there... another goo goo doll fan? lol I love 'em!! amigone, dizzy, that whole album rox!

Ciao xx

Mmh! that was a good sad poem, your poems are real touching.

This was reallly good. it reminded me of how i felt bout my friend kyle dying i was the only one that couldnt be sad and i was the one that loved him most.he was like my brother.

-joanne

A sad write, yet very beautiful. very sweet, and quite heartfelt. wonderful job. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

That was a really sad poem with some excelent imagery. i liked the free verse style of it as i find most other styles very generic. and the ending was perfect. i reallyloved these lines
"But never fade completely
Goodbye"

Wow.. i can really relate to this. It was beautifully written with such strong emotion. I love the last lines "And you begin to fade in my mind. But never fade completely. Goodbye" It makes me want to cry, I completely understand this feeling.. when you begin to forget little details.. but you will never forget them.. anyway this was amazing, flawlessly written. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done :) 5/5 for suree :)