Don Mills

by Aussie   Sep 6, 2006


I don't know who found who
but when this man fell on my screen
only a calm voice
that spoke so few
made my shyness go away
but his understanding of listening
made me addictive to him

this wanted connection for him
made our talents strong
without his curiosity
in my life
i don't know if i would continue to walk on

he wins my heart
by the love of his pen
but by each poem he creates
he's given a peace of my soul
that will never been taken away

in each rhythm
i starve for more
i starve for a relationship
that'll never end

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I like this poem alot. You show, you don't always have to rhyme to make a poem. So many people think a poem is a story that just rhyms. This one poems is really awsome. KEEP IT UP.
    From Your Friend
    Aaron

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    It's beautiful! Keep writing! (BTW, Odessy?) Good stuff! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Hey thankyou so much u feel the same for u...And i hope u dont stop writing ever...