Aww....this poem is so sad! I like it, thought! Nice job!

Very sad poem indeed.
I find it hard this kind of poems

Youve done a great Job..

GodBless!

PERFECT...thats scary its like you took the words from my brain...its just like the lyrics im working on now

GREAT JOB! thanks for the comment on mine!

-Mel

I like this one the most. Imagery and not-to-common wording leads to an interesting, meaningful poem. Well done, 5/5!

This is such a stark and minimal piece-it reminds me of E.A.Poe's 'ALONE'(one of my favorite poems).I can totally relate to this piece and have wrote similiar pieces myself.But Remember-things can always change, we don't have to be as alone as we think we are.Sometimes you find that kindred soul.Keep the faith!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Hmm, I think everything I planned to say wen reading your poem has already been said by other forumers. Good work, keep it up!

This is a very good poem. it's really great .thank for commenting mine.

This is a very good poem.. so sad but full of emotion.. well done 5/5 xx

Awww, how sad. That was very well written. You are an interesting writer. Nice work.. I love it!

Bless... im sure u will not die alone...
it was such a great poem tho... strong, sad but still great.
well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Very great poem 5/5

This is a MANIFICENT poem. It's very
sad though and I know that a lot of
readers can relate to it. You really
out done yourself with this one.
Keep up the wonderful work. I'm
looking forward to reading more of
your work. 5/5

Love
Letty

WOW..i can't find words to express my feelings on this one. In short, i loved it!

I love this poem. it is definitely something that i, and a lot of others, can relate to. good job

Thats a nice poem! yet soo sad! alot of sad emotions in it!

Keep it up!

The flow of this poem was a lil different. it started off slow and ended up fast when i flet like it should have started fast and ended slow because of the ending which by the way was a very good ending!

This is a great poem, great use of words and flow. It isn't 'wordy' like poems tend to be, just straight to the point. 5/5 from me!

Wow thanks a lot for commenting this poem of mine! im really glad for the nice compliment, i truly appreciate it.. again thanks and keep on reading my poems god bless u all and thanksssss

This was so heartbreaking to read, and yet so elegantly written.
The word choice was a joy to read, as was the whole poem, the depth and emotion behind the words really got to me, and the flow was good throughout.
I loved the ending, it was very intense.

Not too cliche; I like it.
I suppose it's the fact that you have a way with words that gets me about your poetry; your describing is very good. Just stay away from the cliche poems is all I can say. =]
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5