Tired of this sh**

by ~mAybEsUmdAy~   Sep 8, 2006


I'm tired of this sh**
I'm tired of there lies
there all so dramatic
when i say i want to die

they all act like they care
but inside i know they don't
others say I'm stupid
thinking that i wont

they really think they know me
but there just fooling themselves
they think ill be OK
even as my wrists swell

they say they are my friends
but its all just a trick
they'll eventually stab me in the back
and then ill add a few more slits

then they'll all worry
and try to make it up
but i know i cant trust them
they helped put me in this rut

so i ask them all to hate me
and stop pretending there my friends
and write them all a note
telling this is my final end

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    This is a rather wonderful poem. I know how it goes, not being able to trust poems.
    Heather

  • 17 years ago

    by Purple

    Unfortunently I know I don't know you. All I know is the eliments you show me, or tell me, and I can only understand to a point as I will never live your life... Which I hope is still there. Know that the idea of me hurting some one else scares me, and I do care but will live on no matter what happens to you.

    Now... I'll use the comment for what it's ment for, commenting on the poems good and bad points in hope of helping the writter grow as a poet. This really is a great poem, the only errors I can see would be typoes (forgetting to caplize I in Ill or and in the). It's got great flow, rhythem, rhyms perfectly, and I beleive that the message comes through well but I could be wrong. It's cold and truethful, it's real...

    You have talent as a writter, and I'm not just saying that because I'm your friend-I hope I'm your friend at least.

    I hope to see you soon.

    ~Purple~

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