My Nature

by valenza   Sep 10, 2006


Near midnight hour, i cannot sleep
empty tears escape my eyes
sorrow i just can't disguise
tree's around seem to weep

morning bird's sing, i cannot wake
with the heart so hollow
my feet will not follow
coldness; summer forgot to take

call of my name, yet i cannot go
dazed becomes the mind
and consciousness i just can't find
even the wisest forgot their "know"

whilst drifting with you i cannot part
friends of a feather flock together
sunshine comes after the stormiest weather
stories end and more stories start

Copyright ©2006 Vanessa

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Unusual rhyme scheme but i enjoyed it a lot. nice ending stanza! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    Amazing word choice, wow. The rhyme scheme was unique from most of the poetry I have read on this site, and your use of metaphors was wonderful.

    The only thing I would suggest is changing the word 'eye' in the second line to make it plural, because it would not only make sense but it would rhyme better.

  • 17 years ago

    by cutytothebuty

    This is so nice..i luv it:)

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