You took my soul!

by Esther   Sep 10, 2006


I trusted you,
I gave you life,
I believed in you,
Yet how?

You broke my soul,
Tore it apart,
With those few words you spoke,
You took my soul.

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  • 14 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Very strong poem. It is concise which keeps the emotions lingering inside the reader. The first stanza set a perfect tone for what was to come. Loved it. the line 'you took my soul' is pretty haunting.
    5\5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren

    Oh My Goodness!!! I love this. In so few lines it pulls out so many emotions and feeling. I love it. I can totally relate to this also. I can really feel the pain and frustrations within these words. Great Job!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by NiQk

    It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?

  • 14 years ago

    by NiQk

    It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Yeah..I kno right..but I am shy..lol

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