Beautifully written.

Ur right trust is a main part but i believe that without faith in God and trust in his plan any relationship will fail! keep writing and check mine out if u have time!

This was really unique and beautiful, I agree with you, one of the main things in a relationship is trust. I really loved this write, keep it up.
5.5
Breanna

So true and expressed eloquently

Very sweet and simple! i like it!
by the way, thanks for the comments!
'appreciate it! :)

This is a nice love poem! trusting someone is the KEY to good relationship! and u said it there! keep it up!!!

Thanks for the comment on my poem! it means alot to me!

Cute...i like it and thanks for the comment on mine

Great job in this one.

Wow thats cute very true good job

Very Beautiful...Love It :)

Hey Zach, Its me Jamie i know you dont no me well but you put a comment on my newest peace... and i wrote a comment back to you.... and i desided to read more of your work... i love it... if you want to just talk you can add me kiwi-babe7@hotmail.com but if you think i'm just kinda werid then its ok you dont have to.... well have a nice day bye
Jamie

I love it, I think it deserves more than 5/5 oh and thanks for letting me know that my profile said i was 15 but age said i was 14, sorry guess i just spaced out when i made it ^^; well anyway I love the poem, good job!
5/5

Wow... this could have been soooo much longer but it was very blunt, honestly i didnt like it at all, also, no form to the poem

This is all true yet people throw those owrds around like they r nothing

Sweet poem..5/5

Great poem...
It's good to know what love is..LoL
Thanks for the comment

keani luvz koa