Awww, that was perfectly written!
I loved it hun ..every stanza, every line...everything is really sad but still great!
keep it up sweetz
Luv
NemO xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Hmm...wow. This is amazing, I absolutely loved it!

x.xBrokenx.x

Great work... There is no such thing as perfect, remembering that allows us to be the best we can without pressure to be anything more than that. A great piece that I found saddening, but revealing.

Awh! I can really relate to this poem. It's so sad, I just hope this isn't really about you. If you EVER need someone to talk to, feel free to PM me, I don't mind. :]

The poem itself was great though, jam packed with raw emotions, very good flow and rhyming! Awesome write! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I loved this poem, and could in a lot of ways relate to it. Just remember, that in the strive to be perfect for the world, one can easily loose one self, and the happiness one needs in life. Great work. Keep it up:)

I loved this a lot, beautiful write!

Very sad poem but shows determination and strength.
Great Write!

I loved this. You have lots of talent. I hope you don't feel this way though.

This is great. well writen

Wow that poem described me i really liked it

I loved the message of this poem, it's a positive one and that's hard to find in sad poems, because most of the time they're hopeless.

I think this girl (you) is really strong, and I sincerely admire anyone like her.

The part I liked the most was this line:

"Some may have wondered why she is still here"

I think there's so many times in life when we find people that have been through so many things, and they're still here fighting in life, and not giving up. That's amazing. In a way I think we are all here suffering and surviving in our own way, but we're still here and that's important, it's important to hold on. So, good for you!

If you ever need someone to listen to you, or anyone to talk to. I'm here, send me a private message. =)

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

That was a beautiful description

Nice one 5.5

A very touching poe, i loved it ;)

I loved your mature command of vocabulary in this poem and your beautiful rhyming. However the two lines are hard to make sense of, maybe the could be revised? Certainly you should do what you want because your poetry is for you, it is just hard for me as I reader to understand what you want to express. Overall a nice write.

-Tainted

If this is really true then in one point it is bad its a good poem but hiding behind i perfect smile just to hide the death that you want so badly isnt the way to go i am sure you have friends that need you here for them so at least think if not of yourself but of them. but all in all i loved the poem and the wonderful ryhming that is what makes me really understand what the person wants me too. keep it up cant wait to see more 5/5
~solie

This is great i love it im glad i saw this poem and decided to read it good job

keenan

Great poem. 5/5

Love teh poem. keep it comin. =]

Hey sarah this is a great poem i would like to get to know you a bit more if you want but yeah your poem is great. *shay*