Oooo chilling, hehe i like the idea of a graveyard it appeals to me hehe, u rhyme ur words extremely well, they match up so well, can't wait for your next piece xox sam

This poem was relli very good! It had a nice flow to it and the rhyming diddnt seem forced! Great work!

OMG.. do u have any idea how painful that sounds?????????????
wow.. i only wish i could find words to explain... i just have no words.. it's extremely well written.. it's too good..

5.5 ( i wish i could give it a 100000 out of 5...)

Much Love,
Ipsita

Ooooo....thats sounded like..it was happining rite infront of my eyes...OMG....xellent write on this..5/5

wow....felt like i got touched my cold ice...nice yaar very nice....good job on it :)

Your poem is very effective i like it alot *shay*

I really like your work, keep it up!

I liked this. It was very good.

Heya!!! this is really beautifull!!!!!
5/5 elle

Loved it!! 5/5!

I like this poem, it's flow is good and I get a vivid image of the situation. Nice!

Wow!! Oh my god this is great. You are a GREAT writer!! Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to add you to my favorites!!
Hayley bird

To be honest, I have never really written or read poems like this!

This was the first I have read and I loved it! I want to read more like this...they are really amazing pieces...

keep it up x x x

Wowie. that was cool! the detailing really painted an amazing picture keep it up!!!

Yaar! that poem pinched me........so touching. 5/5. u hav maintained ur magic in ur dark poems even if u write love poems. keep it up

luv

This poem is very deep thanks for comment on "mother of all"

Interesting, I really enjoyed it- Keep up the good work. ^_^

This poem really got to me. A lot of how I feel I found here. You are very talented.