by Stefi Sep 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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You took my life |
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Oh hun...i'm so sorry that happened to you...great first write though...you conveyed you emotions perfectly. |
by Bitt3rSw33t
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Im sorry you had to go through that but the poem was very well written with a lot of emotion and I as a reader felt it...great job... |
by Brisa
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It had a good flow...nice |