This is great! The best so far! Keep it up!

I think that this is a great poem!

Great Poem! Nice words of choice!

Very nice poem, I love the way it all rymes and go's together, very beautiful.
Your a great writter

Awww....i absolutely love ur poem...its the *sniff sniff* best!!!!!!!!

I LOVED this poem! That wa really good Marcus!!!!!!

It is a greta poem...& keep your head up high!

Aww. Well. That was a very good poem. The flow was good as was the emotion. Nice work.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

Really really good. And it rhymes too, lol. This is really sweet and I completely understand where you are coming from with all this. Good work.
--Silver

Awwwww!!!!!!! it's ABSOLUTELY beautiful!!!! if this is a actual situation in ur life...I hope everything turns out SUPER!!!!!!! lol well i LOVE it...keep up the good work!!!! u got talent!!!!!

I loved it, It was beautiful!
5/5 keep it up

Woww. reeally romantic. aww. the rhyming was absolutely peerfect...
geez good job.
=)
and thanks for the comment.

Oh gosh sorry i just signed ur comment under the wrong name.
ha.
outofhermind678 is my friend and she was signed on...
but this is my real name so yeah.
but GOD u are good at writing.
like reeally good.

Aww! This is so beautiful. Your words are strikingly good! I felt so attached when I was reading it. Keep it up

I loved this poem. you showed so much emotion, and really made the reader wana keep reading. I think this is your best so far. Keep it up!!

Tara

Another great poem by you, i really like this one, it is great. another 5/5 from me.

Omg this was so good...loved it...well deff 5.5....

I think everything has already been said but it's very well written and I like it. Great job. 5/5 I can relate to it.
- Joshy

Omg boy that is so good i wish that someone would write that to me
that is the most awesome poems i have read in a wile its like it touched me becaue i lost my best friend in the whole world the other night and i wish that he could be in my arms again

This poem was really good, I can somewhat relate aswell. I enjoyed reading it. Great Job.