Well, I really dont have enough words to describe this great poem. I can relate to it and it did took me back to my past days.
You have done one of the greatest job.
I really love
A rose on the table.
To witness the betrayal,
it is so deep with a great meaning.
thank you for sharing this great poem. 5/5

For me its very symbolic, the rose, a bottle....
which is nice.
Ryme and rhythm are closely allied.

Good Work.
and
God Bless!

Yesss, I totally got the meaning, be proud? Lol. Anyways, I loved this one, you did an amazing job, and as this is the topic I love lol, I loved this poem! 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Very sweet

Really really good poem..this is a very different topic and it's very creative, i think it has a very nice flow and it had a good meaning...Wonderful write.5/5

Wow, that was amazing hunny! Wow, wow, wow.. Truly amazing.. THe flow was excellent and the hidden meaning was really beautiful yet sad in a way.. Wonderful work! 5/5

Wow.. that was deep and really good! I enjoyed every moment reading it.. keep up the good work!

That is soo.. sweet but i hope this never happens! 5/5!

Good poem.. tells a good story and it has a great flow and rythym.. keep up this work..

Aww that's sad and sweet.. The rhythmn was excellent, and the story behind it, told so brilliantly.. Well done on a great piece of poetry 5/5 xx

Nice work, I like it. :)

Interesting way of telling the story. I liked it all but one line;

"Lain where it's lain" -repetitive and senseless. I suggest you change it.

Your all rigth and i really like the story very interesting. this is sad poem and i like the way it write so great for me keep it up 5/5

Another amazing poem u have a true gift

This poem is amazing. no other words to explain it. beause the way you have explained it is perfect. Your an amazing poet.
Look at some of mine if you want.
Faye

Very deep Shin! I loved this one. The emotion, heart and flow was amazing! Nice work, truly.

It was a beautifully written and thought out poem...I thought meaning was clever.

The first stanza was my favorite in a very beautiful poem. The flow and rhythm was great as well as the content. Very sad poem, this was.

Thanks for entering my contest.