When I look back on my life

by JUSTMEXXX   Sep 14, 2006


When I look back on my life
Sometimes feelings struck like a knife
But threw the hurt and all the pain
Life taught me there will not always be rain
When people say they do care
I would love them to just share
To say you care and not do a thing
Is worse than hurt or believing
The world may turn his back on you
But I believe you will pull it threw
Cause everyone that comes your way
Was there for a reason to stay
And when their time is up with you
It's time to face the color blue
No none can help you to stand up
It's your choise to not give up
When I look back on my life
I thank the one above
Because without saying a word
There's hope not always a sword
So look into your very own soul
May life be a wonderful goal

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  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Well goodnight

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Very emotive.
    The language was very clear and the last two lines finished it off perfectly.
    5/5
    *Gem*
    (Thankyou for the comment on 'Waiting' x)