This is soo sad and emotional :(, But i loved it, just wanted to say hang in there, things will change and good luck ;)

Good poem! hope dis dnt relate to ya n if it does den keep going, things will get better in the end. if u evr want to chat jus send us a message.

take care of yaself and dnt let nebody bring u down xxxxxxxx

Love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing, great job,, makes me think of my best friend,its sad, but very good

I loved it it was a good way to express your emotions and i love that i can feel the emotions without u saying them good work very unique

I liked this poem.
I gave a five.
Excellent.
Dark.
Tip: Maybe if you made the poem skip lines it won't look like one big mass ;/.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

I love your writing style

5/5. so sad and it leaves alot to interpretation however there is an obvious interpretation. well done this was well written.

Aww....that's really sad....