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by Christie Sep 16, 2006
Love, romance /
For every guy who wants a girl,
For only her assets,
That can dump every single one,
With no hint of regret,
I have to say, next time you do,
Look deep into her eyes,
What you'll find is a result of you,
I'm sure you'll be quite surprised.
The girl you'd find, she's never shown,
For her emotions she would never unfurl,
Look past her smiles, you know they're fake,
Congratulations, you've created a girl:
That wants to be treated like a princess,
Just this one time,
That every night, sits in the dark,
And can't do anything but cry.
That wants to find the guy for her,
And fall desperately in love,
That wants to feel like her efforts,
Are always more than enough.
That wants to sleep with her guy,
In just an innocent way,
That wants a guy that after sex,
Loves her enough to stay.
That meaningfully says 'I love you',
And gets nothing in return,
That seems to be put with every guy,
Who will just never learn.
That puts her heart on the line,
To have it shoved back in her face,
That cries when she realises,
She's been dumped or replaced.
That fell for the deceitful lies,
And was left alone,
That was used for her body,
Then mercilessly disowned.
That guards her heart with high walls,
Because of her previous pain,
That feels shes been exploited and used,
And will never love again.
Â© Christie 2006
by Brooke Amity
All of your work is brilliiant!
You ask for constructive criticsm but i cant find any to give! (i say this pretending i am actually qualified to gie constuctive critism lol)
You are in my favourites!!
*true* great job 5/5
Wow this is really well writen
thanks for commenting on my poem
Nice its all true lol
Lol if I could find a girl like this I MIGHT be happy .. but I doubt I'll be able to find one I can be with.. anyway I really liked this poem .. good job 5/5