Ouch!, This Cupid Shot me Bulleye with this poem,Loved it!
5/5
Truly love inspires us in many ways.

God Bless!

Used to fly like the angels,
through the heavens of good and evil.
The golden halo that once sat atop my head
shatters into dust and vanishes, never to be seen again.

I absolutly love these lines 5/5 awsome write

thx for rrc on my poem

Wow...that was beautifully worded, i enjoyed reading through it...it sounded like true, deep emotion, awesome job:):)

Beatuful imagery, the word choice was excellent, the emtion was deep and strong, and the flow was flawles. i loved this poem. thanks for the comment, please keep writting, and I will keep reading. 5/5

Amazing :D The wording was great, it's really sad, but that's what makes it a good poem, its really unique, too, but in a good way, I've never heard of a poem, quite like this before,...loved it :D

Very good
I really thought this was sad
I havent read a poem that made me upset for a short while
I really enjoyed this
Your talented
keep it up

Great peice of write!!...u've expressd emotions well through good choice of words..n u nique style cz of which u sure deserve a 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Wow this was amazing. i could feel the emotion coming off in waves.. Good job. like the other one i commented on maybe if you brake it up into stanzas it would be a bit more easier to read.
the flow and rhyme were great.. Keep up the wonderful work. 5/5

This was really well done I loved the emotion you set in this and the words you used was very nice. Great Job

Such a beautiful, powerful opening with each line getting better than the last.
Once again you did a fantastic job with the imagery.
The flow was spot on in this, and I enjoyed the ending, I thought it was intense and a perfect way to wrap up.

Wow this poem was short but even still you managed to capture my interest and hold it right till the very end. I loved it, so powerful and thought provoking. I loved the metaphores and the beauty that you managed to keep along with the sence of sadness, thats very hard to do yet you did it with such professionlism.(Sp?) Amazing job. Well done.