Yah i agree....but its ok

Wonderful, a most beautiful Tanka Jessy!!!

Very well done I like it!

interesting how you wrote it!

Thanks for you c/r
-Josiah

I've never read a Tanka before. I like the style. You did a great job of it. The flow was good and you described it all so well. Great work! =] 5/5

Tammie

Awh! Jessy! I've missed your poetry, again. I havn't been able to get on here much lately and stuff. And after reading this.. It felt like all those awesome times of reading your poetry flushed through my mind. It was a beautiful write! Keep it up hun. Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Well it made sense to me. It created such an amazing picture in my head, and I loved it. I love ocean sunsets,and reading this reminded me of them. =]]] 5/5

-Jenna.

I loved this one, nice imagery. Great work, yet again. =)

Beautiful!

I could not decide what line was my favorite, for I loved it all! SO many wonderful, colorful descriptions. It was a candy shop for my imagination! Fantastic job.

How creative! I really liked this, it is amazing how you can write such beautiful poems!

You are talented, great poem!

I loved this poem. Most of all the imagery and word choice.

Ahh that was very nice. I especially liked the descriptions; quite original. "Burgundies glitter" was a strong image.
Again, well done on the form, you used it well. It's all praise for this one!!

Breath taking! really well written. i love descriptive words you used! that ones goin in my favorites!