Comments : Ocean Sunsets [Tanka]

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yah i agree....but its ok

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, a most beautiful Tanka Jessy!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very well done I like it!

    interesting how you wrote it!

    Thanks for you c/r
    -Josiah

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammie

    I've never read a Tanka before. I like the style. You did a great job of it. The flow was good and you described it all so well. Great work! =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! Jessy! I've missed your poetry, again. I havn't been able to get on here much lately and stuff. And after reading this.. It felt like all those awesome times of reading your poetry flushed through my mind. It was a beautiful write! Keep it up hun. Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 13 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Well it made sense to me. It created such an amazing picture in my head, and I loved it. I love ocean sunsets,and reading this reminded me of them. =]]] 5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 13 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I loved this one, nice imagery. Great work, yet again. =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ellie

    Beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I could not decide what line was my favorite, for I loved it all! SO many wonderful, colorful descriptions. It was a candy shop for my imagination! Fantastic job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Esther

    How creative! I really liked this, it is amazing how you can write such beautiful poems!

  • 13 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    You are talented, great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    I loved this poem. Most of all the imagery and word choice.

  • 12 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Ahh that was very nice. I especially liked the descriptions; quite original. "Burgundies glitter" was a strong image.
    Again, well done on the form, you used it well. It's all praise for this one!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Breath taking! really well written. i love descriptive words you used! that ones goin in my favorites!