Simply put a great poem, well deserving more than a five.

"How it seemed that I could touch the sky
And grab any star I wanted."

This is a great line. Great work.

Thanks so much for the comment, I'm pretty suprised you like my work that much. Are you in the same club as Diana? I would like to join it soon. Thanks again.

That was AWESOME. Gosh, I read some other poems but this one is like... WOW. ;P Great job!!! ;P Hope to read more of your poems! *hugz*

Don't forget ur in my contest called "a line from a song titled contest" if u don't want to join anymore, that's ok

Great job. Jealousy can do alot to a person! Fantastic ending. Good job 5/5

I really liked it! keep it up!

Jealousy is just as powerful...

woderful choice of words...

wonderful idea and a very nice expression of your feelings.
Lessons can be learned by mistakes...

Woow touching, very unique style, n u have a way with words great job.

Wow great job. i really really really like this poem. i love how it started out happy and then went into sad. i wasnt expecting the ending that it was. i've definitally felt this way at time. great job. i enjoyed reading this. oh yeah and by the way.. I LOVE YOUR PHOTO! is that you? if so then its mad creative :D

Wow. i liked this alot! i loved the vocab, i loved the ending!! keep it up huni.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

I love this one!

This poem is simply amazing.

The poem is a comment on how one often fails to acknowledge their own beauties and skills. We often feel like our greatness should succeed beyond the capacity of everyone else. The narrator could touch the sky and grab a star but never appreciate the comfort of privilege until she falls by her own faults and suffers a torment of her own thoughts and insecurities.

We fail to appreciate the things we have and are blinded by the things we want, things we might never have.

The poem reveals a dark aspect of the human condition.