Simply beautiful penned, oh my...wonder of nature!

Wow I though your Idean comes from a festival lols jk and hey great putting of words here and you are using a different style now great job and keep it up

Geneross

Woah thats really good! You did a fantastic job, your use of words all put together is wonderful. Keep up the great work! =] 5/5

Well done, a marvelous write, kudos!!!

You have very unique poems. I like the emotions they hold, esspecially with this one. =)

Another well written poem, it was great,

Beautiful descriptions. Nicely done style. Keep it up

Beautiful. I can't explain how amazing this poem is. So short but full of deep emotions.

I loved this poem keep up the good work. I only wished that it was a little longer but it is good as it is.

Wow. i really love ur poems... they are short yet descriptive and draw you in!
well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Another good one 5/5

This is MAGNIFICENT...I loved this, but it was way to short.. It seem like one of those cliff hangers..lol..Your terrific
and look forward to reading many more
of your poems..5/5

Letty