Great poem you penned here, simply yet meaningful...keep them coming, and thanks for you nice comment, much appreciated! take care..... bert ~

Wow You made it and great piece well done and i love the words you use and the message you are trying to put across

Geneross 5/5

I had to think while reading that poem. Nice use of words, i have never read a Rondelet before i dont think. Nice job. Keep it up. =]

Superlatively done, excellent penn, great job!!!

The repitition of ''In your silence'' was great! I loved the emotion you put toward it.. Nice work.

For such a short poem it showed lots of emotions. you expressed your words powerfully. i loved it!

I can see very deep emotion in this one, very well written. exellent job

Fabulous.... not too long but meaning gul great5/5

Short, but very clearly written and with great deepness.

Wow..beautifully expressed.

Beautifully penned once again. Your short poems are all so descriptive and amazing. Wonderful work.

Yes, yes, its very good. I like all of your poetry.

Another good poem. its short yet interesting!

well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Short but good 5/5

This was another excellent poem..I'm
running out of ways to compliment you. lol..You leave me speechless, and
that very seldomly happens to me. lol.
Have you every thought about publishing a book of poetry. You have
amazing talent and I think you should
place it out there for the world to see.

Keep up the excellent work hun. I
believe that your on your way to the top.

Love
Letty

The opening two lines are my favourite -- I like the oxymoronic nature of words in silence ...

Ack! I love this short poem! I couldn't write a short poem if my life depended on it. ^_^ Great write. I really liked it, and I don't think there needs to be any fixes. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great 5/5