It's always hard but you can do it lol:)

I really like this probably because i can relate so much to it. It's good that it's not just a totally sad poem, there is hope there too. It flows fairly well and uses emotion. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is one of my favourites of yours, it's filled with so much meaning, and pain and emotion.
I liked how you ended it on a positive note.

Great poem, alot of effoert put into it...loved it 5/5

Very good!.. I feel like every poem that i have read like this was written to me.. lol. it flowed really well. Keep up the good work!

This was a pretty good poem. I think the punctuation in this poem needs work, it throws off the flow a bit. Other than that, I liked it. easily related to as well. :]

Since i'm a minor, I don't know these things but man, love some times bite. 5/5

I thinking that you were the one,
^ SHould be "thought"

Awh, this was really sad and I can relate. I am glad I read this because I can see how much your poetry has improved. =] The flow was good and there were a few more grammer errors up there that I forgot to point out. Although they were only minor so don't worry aobut it. The emotion was clear and the descriptions well done. Keep it up hunny. 5/5

The flow to this was shaky. But the word usage was decent.. The concept was very well thought out... and it had a deep meaning. It was a good read but.. not the best. Could've been a little better :P But since it's you're first poem I'm not going to bash it lol good write!

Wow.. this is so soft. It makes me ponder, and it gave me goosebumps because your tone was so sorrowful, and what you felt is just so big to cover with a screen.. I can feel all :)

Amazing write, my only advice is to change the category of the poem from love to sadness..

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