This was a very imaginative poem...
Could have been a little more colorful but over all a fine job done.

Wow that was a great sweet love poem I love those words you used and specially this lines

___Our love like it always stays___
____Angel whisper "Ours today____
___Wings together now lets fly____
________Come on join me

You made a good choice of words and great job

Keep it up

Geneross

A perfect poem with deep emotions in it, keep up the great job
5/5 from me

Ah lovely work, wonderful write..

God Bless!

The creativity was wonderful, as was the emotion and heart. Nice work, yet again.

Great poem, was sweet well done =D

Jacs
xxxx

WoW I have 2 say very good poem 5/5

Excellent poem. I love the format and flow. It was very peaceful and sweet.

This was a very unique poem... But I
thought that the flow of it was a little
off, also the lines and stars made it
kind of arkward to read. But I liked
the use of your imagination and the
emotion that you put into it.

Letty

I thought this was very sweet.

Awwwwwwww.........i luv this poem!! keep on writing!!

This is my favorit poem of yours that I have read so far. Is this one of your songs I noticed you said you wrote songs sometimes... Its beautiful sweetheart! I love it

This is sooo sweet! and i love the style of writting u used! creative !
and creative writting
keep it up!

Thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me

I think u could have done without all the fancy lines and stuff. it distracts the reader. i liked how u kept repeating "you and i," it really made a presense and made me really think about love. very well written!

Pretty good. My favorite part was the last stanza. Sweet and cute.

This is so good. i love it :)
good job

I agree with Jess, some parts were hard to read but i can see that what you wrote you put your heart into it, nice piece of work...keep it up!

Awww this is a sweet poem, nice work with writting it...

Aww this is sweet . I love it .
(Sorry it`s a short comment xD)
..ღ__MiNDYY

I like the stars, and lines. that was creative, but it did kind of take away from your words. The words you choice were creative enought to draw the reader in on their own. they didn't need help. the poem was wonderfully written, and the emtion was heartfelt. you ddi a great job. 5/5