BRITTANY

by Melissa   Sep 22, 2006


There you stand against the wall by your self in everyones shadow

how lonely you must fill but at least you have your own shadow, me always fallowing you listening to seeing your true colors break through the shadows around us.

~my sister~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

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    how lonely you must fill but at least you
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    should that be feel instead of fill???

    but other then that it is awsome. i love it. cuteness.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This would read so much better if you wrote it more poetry like. If you know what I mean. Right now it reads too much like a story, and not a poem. Again, there were mistakes. Take care over your work and re-check it before you post it. It would be really great if it didn't have as many mistakes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bittersweet Sundown

    Nice work, 5/5

    *check some of mine out sometime*

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