Now i found you

by claerwen   Sep 22, 2006


I begin a new page
Like my life is different everyday
Friends come and go
And I was not really special to anyone
I tried my hardest
To fit in with the rest
I knew someone was out there
That loved me and did care
And as I was feeling at my worst
You were there and you were the first
Dreams and wishing do come true
And that was the day I found you

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  • 17 years ago

    by claerwen

    Awww thanx guys this is what i like to hear ... i wanna learn how to fix my poems so they sound better :) thanx heaps hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I agree with mitsukai eimin. Just trying to be helpful. =] I also think that your line:
    Dreams and wishing does come true

    Could be changed to Dreams and wishes do come true

    I think that would sound better. Just an idea. Keep up the good work. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Hey I really liked the emotion in this poem. You let your feelings about this friendship out and it was written straight from the heart. The only thing is that you should try to fix your rhyming up. If you don't think you can put rhymes in then don't, you don't have to rhyme every poem you write. Anyways good job.

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