Sadness

by true secret emo   Sep 22, 2006


Sadness is an emotion in your heart,
it makes you feel like your ripping apart,

its often showed by wet wet tears,
and sometimes its shown by all those fears.
sometimes you just feel like crying,

or better yet you feel like dieing,
but in the end you begin to realize,
that maybe its better just to bid your sadness goodbye.

please rate this is the first poem that I have submitted anywhere.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Hey, yours is good too! =D

  • 17 years ago

    by *Lost Soul*

    God gurly that's wat i call a good poem especially for ur young age...well im only 15 but still...well keep doin wat u doin!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Lost Soul*

    Hey gurly thanx for the coment i really think this poem is good post more poems up in here gurly!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by syarah

    This is one of my favorite poems i have read. You are very good at exspressing ur emostions.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think it was a good first poem, but that the thoughts you used have been "done before" so try using the same thoughts, but do it using different words. hope this helps you! you're off to a great start as a poet! Jpoet*

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