Oh my god..This is amazing. So simple, so short, so amazing! I just simply loved it...I have nothing else to say. It is simply wonderful...just wonderful.
Most cannot write love poems, but you captured the feeling of lost love very well. Good job.
I have had that happen to me and a matter of fact it was yesterday and my boyfriend/almost X-boyfriend told me that there was a nouther girl that he wants to go out with at his school and he would see her every day and i haven't seen him sence that last day of the summer and if you think you can help me plese tell me that would be do nice of you and i also love your poem it is so true and things like that rilly happen