I like the message, the only mistake was you fall for a wrong person, great job. very true emotion

Oh my god..This is amazing. So simple, so short, so amazing! I just simply loved it...I have nothing else to say. It is simply wonderful...just wonderful.
Most cannot write love poems, but you captured the feeling of lost love very well. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Short, but cute!

Wow so simple but yet so emotional great piece and like your friend said I like the message great piece and the flow was great and the rhythm also

geneross

So sweeet,lovely write.
It was a lovely read indeed.
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

God Bless!

Not bad, but honestly I dont feel it. The words werent bad, but it didnt pull me in, it needs more. You should ass to it.

The simpliest, cutest and meaningful poem i have read, I liked it a lot! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

5/5 really great!

Beautiful penned, lovely yet so heartfelt....though short but well express emotions...

Beautiful poem! short but Great! so very true emotion you exrpessed them so very well! Great work!
Keep it up

-*-Tormented

Very good poem!!! keep writing!!!!

OMG! I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM!!! ITS SO TRUE...I FEEL YOU IT!!! KEEP IT UP!

I have had that happen to me and a matter of fact it was yesterday and my boyfriend/almost X-boyfriend told me that there was a nouther girl that he wants to go out with at his school and he would see her every day and i haven't seen him sence that last day of the summer and if you think you can help me plese tell me that would be do nice of you and i also love your poem it is so true and things like that rilly happen

Keep going

You are talented

Tht one is really good

It seems as if it would make more sense if it was "My only mistake was, i fell in love with you"

I liked it. Short, straight to the point but full of emotion.

Short and sweet... right the the point, loved it

I loved the rythm in yyour poem, espec about the rain. :p