Comments : Only mistake

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I like the message, the only mistake was you fall for a wrong person, great job. very true emotion

  • 13 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my god..This is amazing. So simple, so short, so amazing! I just simply loved it...I have nothing else to say. It is simply wonderful...just wonderful.
    Most cannot write love poems, but you captured the feeling of lost love very well. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Short, but cute!

  • 13 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow so simple but yet so emotional great piece and like your friend said I like the message great piece and the flow was great and the rhythm also

    geneross

  • 13 years ago

    by Misstress

    So sweeet,lovely write.
    It was a lovely read indeed.
    Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

    God Bless!

  • 13 years ago

    by Audrey

    Not bad, but honestly I dont feel it. The words werent bad, but it didnt pull me in, it needs more. You should ass to it.

  • 13 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    The simpliest, cutest and meaningful poem i have read, I liked it a lot! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

  • 13 years ago

    by Lynzie

    5/5 really great!

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful penned, lovely yet so heartfelt....though short but well express emotions...

  • 13 years ago

    by Tormented

    Beautiful poem! short but Great! so very true emotion you exrpessed them so very well! Great work!
    Keep it up

    -*-Tormented

  • 13 years ago

    by AlexAndra

    Very good poem!!! keep writing!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    OMG! I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM!!! ITS SO TRUE...I FEEL YOU IT!!! KEEP IT UP!

  • 13 years ago

    by catgirl101

    I have had that happen to me and a matter of fact it was yesterday and my boyfriend/almost X-boyfriend told me that there was a nouther girl that he wants to go out with at his school and he would see her every day and i haven't seen him sence that last day of the summer and if you think you can help me plese tell me that would be do nice of you and i also love your poem it is so true and things like that rilly happen

  • 13 years ago

    by hagar

    Keep going

  • 13 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    You are talented

  • Tht one is really good

  • 13 years ago

    by James

    It seems as if it would make more sense if it was "My only mistake was, i fell in love with you"

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked it. Short, straight to the point but full of emotion.

  • 13 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Short and sweet... right the the point, loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    I loved the rythm in yyour poem, espec about the rain. :p