Comments : Mislead Butterflies

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    I love the line like

    "Your smile melts my heart away,
    your laugh makes me go wild.
    I never knew love could be like this Christmas to a child."

    its amazing, i love the whole thing tho, can u post the lyrics to the song, i would love to read the whole thing, if its different. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Seeker of Truth

    Very awesome. I know how that goes.

  • 14 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    This is a good poem i like it you really are good writer i dont see how you can say your not that good your great at it

    "Your smile melts my heart away,
    your laugh makes me go wild.
    I never knew love could be like this,
    like Christmas to a child."

    i like this part it makes feel like i can actually feel what you mean exellent job!!! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Rainbow Writers

    Love this poem!