U SAID U LUVED ME YET UR W/HER.

by linda   Sep 23, 2006


U said u loved me yet i don't c it.
U said we would last 4 ever yet u left me.
U said i was Ur life yet Ur over there w/her.
U kiss her n hugg her,n i wonder do u even think of me or do u even remember what use to be.
I stay home every night n wonder bout what Ur doing, if Ur o.k.
I wonder if Ur w/her.
u left me n said we could still be friends yet u pass me like a stranger. at first i was sad n would cry 4 u day n night. but now I'm realizing u were not worth the tears i have cried 4 u. I'm still not over u but i promise I'll get there maybe not 2day or tomorrow but i promise i will.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Alma

    Poem is full of emotions- its lovely
    a powerful ending
    loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ciera

    GIRL I LIKE THIS POEM IT REMIND ME OF MY EX-BOYFRIEND THAT JUST BROKE UP WITH ME FOR SOMEOTHER GIRL....IM STILL MAD AND SAD AND WHEN I THINK BOUT IT I CRY BUT IMA GET OVER HERE SOONER OR LATER....:(

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it for sure:):):)

    its a very good one:):):)

    keep up the good work:):):)
    i will give ya for sure 5/5:):)

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww this is a really cute poem.. i like it a lot.. the only thing is that its not really in poetry form.. but besides that i like it a lot.. and i love the last line "I'm still not over u but i promise I'll get there maybe not 2day or tomorrow but i promise i will. " idontknow why but its really cute

    keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem is very strong and emotional. I know how it feels, trust me. Just remember everything will work out...it just takes time, you'll find someone better and then he'll be the one regretting it. Lovely work.

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