I haven't seen this style of poetry before. Its clever, and looks difficult. You did a very good job. I love the ending. Keep up the great work. =]

Wow, beautifully written, it is amazing the way you have put tit down on paper!

I liked the structure. it made it interesting to look at as well as reda : D i would give it a 5/5 for the refreshing references to flowers and such things that made it even more beautiful to read, but unfortunately the flow and lack of meaning let it down and lowered it to 4/5. still, a very worthwhile poem.

Wow nice structure for this poem is was good but really didnt make much sense to me

Kool poem. sounds good... really short and descriptive!
well done

Love
jacs
xxxx

Misstress this is a new style nice job... well just contunue showing ur talent great poem kabs!5/5

I liked it. But I liked the vocab you used the most. I thought it wasn't normal to use in every day life, and it was good that you took the time to be creative. I liked the desciprtions too. They were wonderfully done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hello Misstress,

what a beautiful poem you penned here, oh my...this was creative written, yet very interesting....i liked the way how you write them.....keep them coming...take care!

That was really good, it made a lot of sence...and i got exactly what you were trying to say:)..5/5

Wow.. I really loved this.. The imagery was amazing, the flow wonderful, and the word choice perfect. A very interesting tale to speak of the wind..and you did it greatly. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This poem is filled with imagery and prfound inspiration

I usually don't like overlapping lines. But you did a great job in this style.

A very well written poem by a great poet, keep up the great work.5/5 from me

You are truly an amazing poet! I loved
reading this poem. I love your style.
Not many people can write in this form.
I know, because I tried it a few times
myself. You have an amazing way
with words. You put them together so
wonderfully that the reader can just let
their immagination run wild without
missing the true meaning of the poem.
I and comment on poems everyday
and I only find a few that keep me
captivated and this is one of them. I'm not sure if you are in my favorites
or not. But if your not. I must welcome you ....Excellent piece of work.
5/5...Keep up the extradinary work..

Love
Letty

P.S. Thank you for the wonderful compliment. It is readers like you that
make's me want to strive to become the best.

Nakapagtataka iyon

october xx

Thats really cool, loved it!
thanks for taking time to comment and read my poem

Cool way of tpying it..