How sweet those words that you have knitted.Such wonderful,lovely arrays of lines,that my heart feels warmth inside.

God Bless!

You seem to me like a great poet of old...... like a reincarnation of shakespeare your language is so elegant! beautiful!!!!

O wow this is a great poem i love it!!! 5/5!!!
Sarah

Wonderful piece, a most exquisite penn, bravo!!!

OK, I'm mad the lil red # thing wasn't working on my favorites list because I definatly didn't see you had a new poem!! (Thanks for my comment by the way)

But, omg sometimes I am left with nothing to say to you after reading your poetry ...I'm just stunned seriously...and this is one of them...what is there to say but simply..perfection! Beautifully written poem.....no other comment needed!
Chels

Wow....that is some of the most beautiful poetry i have ever read, and this is only the first i have read of you...amazing, i completely loved it. You have proved there is a fragrance to love that needs no imagination. Beautiful. and thank you for commenting on my poem as well, i cannot wait to read more of your work.

~peace~
WeepingW

Great poem, you rhymed very well and the beat was near perfect! perfecto! Muy bien! Jpoet*

Awwwwww.....this poem is really good...is luv it alot!!!

I am truly amazed! This is one of the
best poems ever written. I loved this
poem. You painted a beautiful picture.
It kind of reminds me of the poetry of
old english. When I read this poem
it was like reading a short historical
romance and those I truly love. I have
over two thousand of them. I wish that
I could write less then half as good as
you have written this poem. It's poets
like you that makes me want to strive
to be the best of the best. I say this
to you truly from the heart. You are
one of the best! Have you published
a book of poetry yet? I hope so.
Because poetry like this should be
placed for all to see.

Keep up the magnificet work
5/5

Love
Letty

Bert my darling - firstly thankyou for your kind comments it has been a while since I have been inspired to write, but I have missed you and your poetry. This piece is just magnificent my darling really I feel speechless, breathless even. Your words flow with perfection, your use of imagery captivates the reader and all I think after reading this piece is "beauty". I'm in awe my friend really am! You have such a precious talent and spectacular way with words your the envy of ammature poets like myself. Congratulations on a high quality and mesmorising poem. The best from the best :o) Cheers Risa xoxo

Bert my darling - firstly thankyou for your kind comments it has been a while since I have been inspired to write, but I have missed you and your poetry. This piece is just magnificent my darling really I feel speechless, breathless even. Your words flow with perfection, your use of imagery captivates the reader and all I think after reading this piece is "beauty". I'm in awe my friend really am! You have such a precious talent and spectacular way with words your the envy of ammature poets like myself. Congratulations on a high quality and mesmorising poem. The best from the best :o) Cheers Risa xoxo

This was a very touching poem! it was heart felt, and wow i loved the words u used!

Wow, awsome write, (speachless) now if I could become as good as you one day....... 5.5
thanks for taking the time to rad my poem btw

Absolutely amazing write. I can tell you're a romantic poet. Love the old English style. Great sonnets.

"How many songs were never sung, of poetries were never written, of the images were never painted, of the risks never took, the bridges were never cross, about the romantic words were never spoken... locked up inside an insulated heart - this prison manufactured by another person... were let without never be expressed because somebody made us shame, gave up us or returned to us dumb with a cruel word, an act without reason and indicated or just implied that we were not good enough and, tragically, we them believed Let this be the moment when we choose more to believe them....."

comment beau...

Such wonderful work you do. :)

-Luna

Stunning.

This was beautiful keep it up a very touching piece. =] xx

Wow.. this poem was so beautiful and touching. It flowed very well and you worded it very well. You did such an amazing job on this. 5/5

I love this poem. ^-^

There are no words that can really express how beautiful I felt this poem was, your wording is perfect! so elegant and romantic! love it!