Comments : Why can't I just believe?

  • 17 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    To sum it up in a word ; Beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    This is a beautiful poem. 5/5. ur talented. well done. keep writing. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Really beautifully written. Honest and sweet. Great way in which you grab your readers attention.

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 17 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    This was a rele great poem....keep it up...u rock ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mohamed

    :)
    what a touching poem, I feel like I am watching everything, perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The feeling of love can be felt in this write and then the sense of lost at the end. Wonderfully and beautifully pinned.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cory

    I loved this. I could feel the adrenaline and the wanting. Amazing. Keep it up. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Paula

    So many times ive been there in that poem, i wish i could write more in depthly about my sexuality but fear people will be nasty and small minded. if you wanna chat contact me through my profile xx keep it up.
    gay pride 2007 x

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem well written and meaningful Steve