Not really alone

by Melissa   Sep 24, 2006


Lonely you stand in the corner
lonely you don't even look up
afraid of what people might think of you afraid to open up
then another walks across the room just to say high to you
and a smile comes across your face
and you see for the first time
your not really alone in life and that you truly have nothing to worry about.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Too short! sorry but your poems could pass as quotes. Some lengths vary but if you have something to say you should say it depending on the form. Quotes are typically short, poems are at a wide range of lengths and all of yours are - too short. Im sorry I havent been as nice as I should. Today hasnt been good. Like I said I like WHAT you have to say just not HOW you say it.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    "then an other walks across the room just to say high to you"

    'Another' is all one word.

    There were quite a few mistakes here, and it didn't flow as well as it could have. However the vocabulary and rhyming was really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Good poem little sis keep up the good work.

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