Take Me But Not My Life

by Īšŋŧ šħє βєдũţĭƒũļ Ŵħēņ ŝħė Æ’Ä…   Sep 26, 2006


Little girl In the corner
Reading her picture book
In fear of her daddy
Trying hide where he wont look

Hiding from his screaming
From his prying eyes
She just wants to make It
Through the night alive

Living In fear of her father
Who beats her for fun
Like shes In a boxing ring
Yet shes never, ever won

Still, she holds love for him
The man who beats her to the floor
She knows that while shes still alive
He has not won the war

+ Hey guys, please leave a comment, as this Is my first and Id really like feedback for Improvement, thanks Sophie +

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  • 17 years ago

    by sickoflies

    Great poem 5/5. reminds me of a book called Basterd out of carolina. good book

  • Hey great peom, its so sad!
    well done, love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a great first poem. check up on your rhyme scheme a little, but other than that...GREAT job nice poem. really enjoyed it! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    These words are very sad to read at.
    Sorry.
    Dont lose hope.Everythings gonna be alright soon.

    Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

    God Bless!