My little brother

by Doug   Sep 26, 2006


The way I lost my best friend
Was like no other
Terrified of death
Said my little brother

It was dark and foggy
In a car you couldn\'t see
It was so terrifying outside
Death would be a fee

Before that day
My brother and I played
Before that day I would of
Always called him gay

But now Im lonley
Without my brother
The closest things I see of him
Are the tears from my mother

I dont even pray to him
Because I am sad
I am so upset the previous years
I treated him bad

Why did he die
Why wasnt it me
He got smashed
While I was thrown through a tree

He was alive for a while
So I talked to him
My last words to my little brother
Were hey I love you Ben

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  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    This is so sad. However, you did an amazing job on it. I loved reading it. Also, as Keeley said, you should pray, it might be good for you. I'm sorry for what happened. bye

  • 17 years ago

    by Keeley Amberg

    Your poem is quite sad. I'm sorry to hear that this has happened to you. How old was your brother?? I'm sorry to hear of this, but you could at least try to pray. I know its painful, I just wrote a poem about a death as well. Its called, Anthony Joesph Saviano... You should go read it...