MY happyday:)

by Aussie   Sep 27, 2006


Has this other person
so cheerful and kind
walks with friends
the only thing
that haven't change
is my name

i hide behind
my failing past
that leaves red marks
all over me

this pretty girl
keeps Innocent people
from my trap
of increasing (unforgotten) memories

has i sit alone in darkness
with a thin line of hope
waiting for that day
this disastrous body
will fall to an end

that day
a crack will form
on my face for so long
that day will be
my happiest day

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  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    "waiting for that day
    this disastrous body
    will fall to an end"

    i love that. this is a really good poem, you have to think to understand it, but once you do it works on so many levels.

    thanks for the comment.

    -lonelynow xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    This one is sad :( but chin up kiddo, stiffen that upper lip :)) you have me here to make you smile another day :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Aww sweetie i like :) 5/5 it has all the emotion im looking for :)

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Good poem luv, keep it up!!

    --ally

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