by sarah Sep 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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I am ill |
by Suri dawn
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I really like how you layed this out.Well-written and lots of emotion!Great job! |
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Nice poem. 5/5, |
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Hey good poem, but i would try to leave the text language out of a poetry website, thats all, but im not going to vote you downvote you just for that. Great poem, keep it up. |
by e LIZ a beth
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Good poem. thanks for commenting mine :D |
by TheReign
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It's deep. i like it. |