Define-different

by Aussie   Sep 28, 2006


So many differ
but sadly can't solve
our common must

so many great ideas
but there's negatives
that turns the lights off

if only we're open-minded
talents be put to use
then why call it different

*it's a haiku school project*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Lol a LIL confused about what to give it. On the one hand it sounds good, but on the other... I can't see any definite pattern, let alone 5-7-5. Am I missing something? Is there like a different way of doing it? 5-5-4 6-5-5 8-6-6. Haha oh well, good stuff!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Intresting :) 5/5

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